Chapter Seven: Suckage in Real Time

[kaitou]

Chapter Seven finished and up. I like the beginning. I like the very end. Somehow it all tanks in the middle where I repeat myself a lot. What the hell, it's Nano, right? I remember when I went to Clarion and some of us went to the archives and looked up the years that our teachers had been in the workshop to find the stories they wrote when they were at our level. It would be nice to dream that someday someone could look at this like that. "Oh, so this is what raw story looks like." But...you know...I doubt it.

Anyway. Fic. It's up.